Some opening sentences from your essays.
As you can see on the course web page about essay structures, the opening sentence should make “a conscious attempt to provoke or capture the reader’s interest, what I’m calling a hook.”
Ladies and gentlemen sit down grab a drink and buckle up because we are going to introduce a new political party that will blow your mind.
Join the race to make this earth a better place!
Have you had enough yet?
When we are little, we are asked what we want to be when we grow up.
Do you want change? Do you want to be heard? Do you want a voice?
It is time to let the past go and build a new future – a future of progress, excellence, freedom, and prosperity.
We are the [ ] Party.
The [ ] Party is a political party whose members stand to fight against injustice placed on the human race.
The success of a nation depends on the health of its people.
We flourish when we help others flourish.
Are you tired of living in a country based majorly on opinion?
The future is ours.
With new crimes terrorizing our streets every night, can you ever think of a time when you thought it was completely safe to leave your door unlocked during a night’s sleep?
Since the beginning of time, there has been injustice for many people in many different places around the world.
What can be more popular these days than the government topic, and the political situation in our country?
America. The American dream: the ideal that every US citizen should have an equal opportunity to achieve success and prosperity through hard work, determination, and initiative.
Money is one of the essential resources that provides fuel for our country.
The party that I have decided upon using is the [ ] Party.
Land of the free or is it?